Thursday 30 January 2014

The highwayman by Imani

It was dark and very dusty , the trees are small prickly fingers swaying in the moonlight.It was scary like a lion trying to grab you and eat you. Its very quiet ,all you can hear is the wind whispering to you.The moon was shining like a shooting star. the road was very narrow and it was a ribbon of moonlight .

Through the little path ,the highwayman came riding on his horse .The small branches are skeletons, when the highway man came riding it got darker, and darker like caves.

7 comments:

  1. like your 2 paragraph its good

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  2. I love all your descriptive language and your similies it really grabed me in.

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  3. I love the description! It is really good and you included lots of similes and metaphors.

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  4. I looooooooooooovvvveeeeee this poem

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  5. I love your adjectives

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