Thursday 30 January 2014

The highway man by yasmina

In year 5 we've been focusing on a poem called the high way man by Alfred Noyes  .  We've  been writing  scenes from the poem . I hope you enjoy it .
By  Yasmina
As the haunted hallway stayed silent , the still trees are as tall as a rocket . The moon is a white bunch of cotton wool .Standing still , the gates are as stripy as a tiger ! Quietly , everything is a solid ocean of sadness
.  every where is a ghostly galleon...

when the bright moon was silent , it glowed into the misty moor . the trees are giant snakes lighting across the Halloween scene . Also  , the grass was no where to be seen . This road was a place where if someone came in it would never come out . As the were wolf howled in the moonlight that body of darkness was nowhere to be seen . The night grew darker .The sky was a dark as space .

A lowed noise screamed along this horrifying night there was no one to be  seen and there wasent
a sight . silently the misty moon glowed silently . This place was a maze of terror ...

10 comments:

  1. Well done this is absolutely faboulous!

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  2. your blog is sent out very well

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  3. Like your ellipses at the end it makes it dramatic

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  4. This is really good

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  5. i like the end with the ellipses

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  6. I like how you started by explaining what we are doing in class

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