Thursday 30 January 2014

The Highwayman by kalyani

The Highwayman is a poem for older children and adults . The poem has a lot of showing not
telling ; there is also a lot of descriptive language .

The forest was a maze of horrors and the path was an ocean of dust .
The moon was a button of pearl white glinting in the darkness with witches fingers trying to grab it out of the pitch black sky.

The grass was like rotten candy canes being brushed in the harsh breeze .

4 comments:

  1. like the poem so cool

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  2. We worked well and I like how you changed it up

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  3. i like your second paragraph

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  4. Your description is sooo good

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