It was dark and very dusty , the trees are small prickly fingers swaying in the moonlight.It was scary like a lion trying to grab you and eat you. Its very quiet ,all you can hear is the wind whispering to you.The moon was shining like a shooting star. the road was very narrow and it was a ribbon of moonlight .
Through the little path ,the highwayman came riding on his horse .The small branches are skeletons, when the highway man came riding it got darker, and darker like caves.
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