By Yasmina
As the haunted hallway stayed silent , the still trees are as tall as a rocket . The moon is a white bunch of cotton wool .Standing still , the gates are as stripy as a tiger ! Quietly , everything is a solid ocean of sadness
. every where is a ghostly galleon...
when the bright moon was silent , it glowed into the misty moor . the trees are giant snakes lighting across the Halloween scene . Also , the grass was no where to be seen . This road was a place where if someone came in it would never come out . As the were wolf howled in the moonlight that body of darkness was nowhere to be seen . The night grew darker .The sky was a dark as space .
A lowed noise screamed along this horrifying night there was no one to be seen and there wasent
a sight . silently the misty moon glowed silently . This place was a maze of terror ...
As the haunted hallway stayed silent , the still trees are as tall as a rocket . The moon is a white bunch of cotton wool .Standing still , the gates are as stripy as a tiger ! Quietly , everything is a solid ocean of sadness
. every where is a ghostly galleon...
when the bright moon was silent , it glowed into the misty moor . the trees are giant snakes lighting across the Halloween scene . Also , the grass was no where to be seen . This road was a place where if someone came in it would never come out . As the were wolf howled in the moonlight that body of darkness was nowhere to be seen . The night grew darker .The sky was a dark as space .
A lowed noise screamed along this horrifying night there was no one to be seen and there wasent
a sight . silently the misty moon glowed silently . This place was a maze of terror ...
Well done this is absolutely faboulous!
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ReplyDeleteI like how you started by explaining what we are doing in class
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